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Your name is ____, and your girlfriend is a lovely girl named Terezi Pyrope.
Terezi is a human, just as you are, with ginger hair and freckles by the dozen, always wearing red shades. Her favorite color was red, and you didn't mind. You called it cute, and always wore something red around her, even if she couldn't see.

She was blind.

Everyone scowled at you, but you ignored it. You were happy with Terezi and her odd ways. Even her house was odd, with all of the plushies being hung from their necks and suspended from the ceiling. She kept a small diary under her mattress, and one day, you got curious and read it.

You don't speak of the diary entries, only carry on with life.

Terezi and you were eating lunch one day when she stopped eating abruptly.

"Hey, ___. I need to ask you something."

"Hit me." you responded.

"You love me , right?"

"Of course!" you had to gawk at the question, thinking it was obvious.

"Even if I was deaf?"

"Yeah." you tilted your head.

"...Even if I was mute?"

"Certainly..." you started become quiet, feeling uncomfortable.

"Even if I was....dead?"

"Yes Terezi, yes I would! What's causing you to act like this suddenly?" you spat, frowning afterwards. 

"Nothing..." she sighed, hugging you. You stroked her hair, whispering how much you cared for her in her ear, rocking her back and forth. "Okay...it's something. There are these dumbasses at school who said that you wouldn't..."

"And you believed them."

"Yeah..."

"Don't." you said, kissing her. "Just, don't."  she nodded her head, letting out a soft sob. "I need you... I'll love you forever, no matter what, I promise."
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A few days later, you were called to Terezi's house, and when you entered, you came with chalk for her ever-growing collection. 

"Honey, I'm hooooome~" you joked, looking around.

"Over here." Terezi sat at her bed, writing something down in her diary before storing it. "Hey ___. You're a bit early..."

"Didn't want to keep you waiting. I got you some chalk." you beamed, handing her the pack.

"All red?" she smiled softly.

"Yup, all red. Different shades too. Apple, vermilion, candy..."

"Thanks." she smiled and handed it back to you. "Hey, why don't you put it in the closet with the others, that's where I moved them all to."

"All righty." you took the package and walked two rooms over to the closet, placing the chalk in the large pile.

When you returned to the room, Terezi's neck was in a loop of rope, she was floating.
Floating with suspension.
She was dead.

"I..." you sputtered, running over and pulling her down. "You...." you took the note that was in her hand.

'im sorry, ___
i couldnt take it anymore
my mind told me you dont love me'

"I promised I'd always love you...." you started crying, ripping the paper into shreds. "If you died...even if...."
whoops
I should stop sadstucking
it's becoming bad
Terezi (c) Hussie
You (c) you

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Nepeta/Terezi/Eridan/Vriska/Karkat/Feferi/Sollux/Tavros/Aradia/Gamzee/Equius/Kanaya
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:iconchocolatmellofangirl:
ChocolatMelloFangirl Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
YOU'RE BECOMING ANDREW HUSSIE!!!!!!!!
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:iconverehren:
Verehren Featured By Owner 2 days ago
hello my name is nina, im 16, and im a mini-huss
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:iconchocolatmellofangirl:
ChocolatMelloFangirl Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh *pained shrieking* how could you!?!?!
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:iconfanfic-queen:
Fanfic-Queen Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
wHAT. No. The sadstuck in this fanfic is too high! 
No but this is awesome :3 I really like it
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:iconlunapawz:
Lunapawz Featured By Owner Edited Oct 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I was reading all these cute fics and tHIS THING DESIDES TO SHOW UP ;-;
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:icontwiggythegiraffe:
TwiggyTheGiraffe Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You broke my feels. :iconsadtereziplz:
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:iconverehren:
Verehren Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014

'tis my profession B)
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:icontwiggythegiraffe:
TwiggyTheGiraffe Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Im still not over this story. Before I run and look, have anything that might fix the afore mentioned broken feels?
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:iconverehren:
Verehren Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014

lOTS OF THEM
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:icontwiggythegiraffe:
TwiggyTheGiraffe Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:icongamzeeapprovesplz:
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:iconblackxbluezoroark:
blackxbluezoroark Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I just killed whatever happiness I had
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:iconkiraloveskai:
KiralovesKai Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
AHHH OH AH MY GAWDDD!!!! TEREZIIII!!! NO!!! :iconsobbplz:
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:iconverehren:
Verehren Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014

sorrryyyyy
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:iconkiraloveskai:
KiralovesKai Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I WANT TEREZI BACK TT^TT you should make a sequel
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:iconverehren:
Verehren Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014

ehhh,,
maybe
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:iconkiraloveskai:
KiralovesKai Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Yay its a maybe
If u do
Let me know
I will stalk
You foreva
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:iconlogan0x0:
Logan0x0 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
excuse me while i go cry my eyes out ;~;
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:iconkitcatsky:
KitcatSky Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*Startled Kitcat noises* o-o
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:iconfandomfreak69:
FandomFreak69 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Student
nononononononononononononononooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! why the motherfuck would you break my heart like that??? i was enjoying the story and then all of a sudden you write the ending! I didn't know this was a sadstuck! please put it in the title if you read this! please! i cant stop crying, and i'm suicidal, so i wish you put a warning somewhere
Lovely Shoujo (Crying) [V4] 
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:iconverehren:
Verehren Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014

oHHhH mY GOD I AM SO SORRY 
DO YOU WANT A REQUEST I WILL WRITE YOU A THING 
A FLUFFY N CUTE THING
AAAA
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:iconfandomfreak69:
FandomFreak69 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Student
that's okay. it'd be nice if you could, but i really just wish you'd put 'SADSTUCK' in the title...
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:iconverehren:
Verehren Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014

nnnnn
i should
but i suffer from lazy-itis
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:iconfandomfreak69:
FandomFreak69 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Student
no, thats okay
you don't have to write it if you don't want to
but thank you
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:iconverehren:
Verehren Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014

WHAT DO YA WANT BAE
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:iconknightofdoomshipper:
knightofdoomshipper Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Oh look, a TerezixReader fanficiton. *Clicks* *Reads* *Reads ending 5 times* OH WHAT NO
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:iconverehren:
Verehren Featured By Owner May 30, 2014

surprise? o w o
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:icondemonicwolfsoul:
demonicwolfsoul Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Student General Artist
I read the last part like a thousand times to make shore I read it right. ;-;
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:iconverehren:
Verehren Featured By Owner May 19, 2014

you did--
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:icondemonicwolfsoul:
demonicwolfsoul Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Student General Artist
Sadly yes
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:icondemonicwolfsoul:
demonicwolfsoul Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Student General Artist
The rope is cald a noose by the way
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:iconkindofgoth:
KindOfGoth Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
wHAT IS THIS

OH

A TZ ONE YISS

*clicks*

*faves*

*reads*

wHY
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:iconverehren:
Verehren Featured By Owner May 16, 2014

youre welcome
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:iconkindofgoth:
KindOfGoth Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I-
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:iconjuniorkat:
juniorkat Featured By Owner May 4, 2014
*crying* THIS IS NOT OKAY ;-;
Terezi-Chan!!! ;-;
(Note: I'm not saying I don't like it, I'm just saying I'm close to tears right now.)

WHYYYYYYYYYY???????
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:iconpastapal6667:
pastapal6667 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That's it *kameyameya's herself*
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:iconforeverfiolee21:
ForeverFiolee21 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014
enufhrjeuhbvurjegheuivhirvg9uvurgdivheiovefnv;gurvbiwdab;ci nnnnnnnnnnnuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu mmmmyyyyyyyyy bbbbbbbaaaaaabbbbbbbyyyyyyy! TT^TT you were the best girlfriend ever!!!!!
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:icongemini725:
Gemini725 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Now, sorry to say it but that ending was a bit ass pulled...
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:iconcindraofthelost:
CindraOfTheLost Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*sobs loudly* WHYYYYYY!?!?!?!?!?! *more gross sobbing*
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:iconxxandybiersack:
XxAndybiersack Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Student Writer
Romano (Cries) [V4] Sasami Sasasegawa (Mad) [V7] 
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:iconmistercelery:
MisterCelery Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Dem Feels Do.
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:iconsuperinsanewolf:
Superinsanewolf Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I have serious depression... Why the fuck am I reading these seriously... GOD DAMMIT BRAIN WHY YOU NO WORK RIGHT!!!!!!!!
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:iconthe-ninja-potato:
The-Ninja-Potato Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Student General Artist
-cries- b-but terezi i love y-youuuu ;~; Y U GOTTA PLAY ME LIKE THAT
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:iconblack-butler362:
black-butler362 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Student Interface Designer
Wtf :iconcielrageplz:
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:iconblack-butler362:
black-butler362 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Student Interface Designer
:iconkarkatdothisthingplz:
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:iconheartofgold15:
HeartOfGold15 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

nononononononononononoononononononononoononoooooooooooooooooo

why

why u do dis

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:iconemchompski:
EmChompski Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013
I FAVED THIS
BEFORE I FOUND OUT SHE D-DIED
WHY DID SHE DIE NOOOOOO MY BBY
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:iconverehren:
Verehren Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
ALWAYS READ THROUGH FIRST-
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:iconbeishel:
Beishel Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013
....the..feeeeels I am so sad now :,(
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:icongamzee-makara2000:
GaMzEe-MaKaRa2000 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
GAHHHHHHH! THE FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELS! Meowth Crying Plz 
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